02 April 2008 @ 09:26 pm
In the Red Droplets  
The first April shower 
comes as a surprise.
We do not expect such beauty 
around these parts.
The dirty air and gray skies 
simply won't have it.
But the speckled windows 
have other praises to sing.
Image credit to http://everyfreakingthingwillbealright.blogspot.com/2007/11/we-talk-too-much-love-too-little-lie.htmlI choose not to hit 
the wiper handle.
"Let the droplets live!" 
I think.
The taillights refract their red glow 
through the globs of windshield water.
The green traffic lights fight for space 
in the red droplets.
Then dancing beads funnel together and 
race up the windshield toward the roof.
Smooth dark trails meander
through minefields of 
colorful pocked explosions.
Beauty in waterdrops.
Southern California rain. 
 
 
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Newport2Newport: Double_Delight[info]newport2newport on April 3rd, 2008 12:48 pm (UTC)
Ah, lovely.

I love the rain.

And I love this poem.

See, you can't stop writing, even when you're overbusy. No doubt about it...you're a WRITER, Jonathan.
The Blog of Aspiring Novelist Jonathan Stephens[info]jonstephens on April 4th, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
You're right. The writing just plagues my brain in all kinds of good ways. I miss my little story. :( But this poem, it wrote itself in my head for me on the way home from work the other day when the rain starting coming. If only the rain would return.

Miss you all at PFL.
Newport2Newport[info]newport2newport on April 4th, 2008 11:38 pm (UTC)
We miss you, too. Hurry back to your story and to us. :)
ryan_field[info]ryan_field on April 4th, 2008 02:49 pm (UTC)
That was a nice, unexpected surprise post today. And I think we're getting you're rain right now here in the east.

This is one of those days when I'm grateful to have found this blog by accident.



The Blog of Aspiring Novelist Jonathan Stephens[info]jonstephens on April 4th, 2008 11:29 pm (UTC)
So you stole our rain! Give it back, I say. It just dropped a few plops on us and then sped away in the night. That's one of the worst parts of SoCal...all the rain comes at night while I'm asleep, so I seldom get to enjoy it. Pity.

Anyway, glad this was a joy to you.